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Little Songs & Lyrics to Genji
Poems by Adam Penna
127pp
0979870712 / 978-0979870712
About
Little Songs & Lyrics to Genji
are two sequences of poems where, in the author’s words, he was
attempting daily to “right” himself.
The poems of
Little Songs take
an unrhymed sonnet form that looks back to the religious work of Donne
and Hopkins, and the autobiographical element in Dante’s
New
Life, to weave a
spiritual meditation on the natural world and the sacred minutiae of
everyday living. In each poem we are shown suburban streets, homes, and
front-yards, and the trees and animals and human inhabitants that fill
those spaces, all presented through the mind of the quietly-seeing poet.
What we emerge with is a evocation of a world akin to Wallace Stevens’s
vision of New Haven, alive with eternity.
The poems in
Lyrics to Genji
are filled with the same subjects, but approach them more playfully.
Addressed to an invisible friend named Genji (a name which means
“treasure”), the poet begs answers to the universal and mundane
questions of his day (“Genji, do you have a brother?”, “Who could bear a
full life, Genji?”), and ruminates over recurring dreams, childhood
memories, questions of ethical responsibility as well as home repair,
and the frequent, mischievous presence of Genji’s wife. Whereas
Little Songs
approaches something like direct prayer,
Lyrics to Genji
come closer to Zen meditations, or koans.
The overall vision of this unique collection is one of abiding mystery
and gratitude for the natural and invisible worlds, and for a state of
quiet contemplation that brings such awareness about. As the poet says
to his friend: “I’m grateful, Genji./How do I know?/I sing.”
Reviews
George Held, Book/Mark
LITTLE SONGS & LYRICS TO GENJI
is arguably one of
the better books by a Long Islander since Leaves of
Grass
appeared on July
4, 1855, but whereas Whitman is a rhapsodist of long free-verse lines,
Penna is a psalmist of concise formality. While Whitman renovated
poetry, Penna builds on the tradition of religious lapidaries like
George Herbert and Gerard Manley Hopkins. And whereas Whitman celebrates
the self, Penna invites God to enter his soul.
This volume holds two books in one, and either would be a small treasure
on its own. The first, "Little Songs," hearkens back to Donne's Holy
Sonnets. Though Penna's sonnet form has the requisite 14 lines of
approximate iambic pentameter, it is unrhymed in the manner of Robert
Lowell's Notebooks. Moreover, Penna divides his sonnets into
various stanza patterns, the usual 4, 4, 3, 3 as well as alternatives
such as 3, 3, 4, 4 and 3, 4, 4, 3 and 5, 5, 4.
In spirit these songs inhabit their epigraph, from Wallace Stevens, the
part that says, "Poetry is like prayer." Addressed to a "you," at times
maybe Moira, the book's dedicatee and the poet's wife, at other times
the poet himself, these poems concern God, prayer, and love and how they
mesh with the rest of life, frequently symbolized by trees and birds and
birdsong. Penna's elemental meditations should encourage readers who
despair over the narcissism and egotism of much other contemporary
poetry.
LITTLE SONGS
contains fifty pieces, divided into two parts of twenty-six and
twenty-four poems respectively. The first part introduces the vocabulary
and symbology of the whole, and the second part elaborates on those
elements. Thus, Part II opens with "Songbirds," which begins,
It is like you, because your heart is a bird,
to be frightened
and dart over the ground,
when nothing hurts
you, nothing lies in wait.
You flit, from tree to tree, because you think
love is a motion
toward, but stillness loves
and stillness sets
the heart back on its perch.
The title of this poem plays off one called "Birdsong" in Part I, in
which the poet refers to "small languages of trees and birds."
"Songbirds" goes on to say that song is "the one thing that is pure and
true," the achievement of which is Penna's aim in these "little songs."
Yet "songs aren't . . . praise . , aren't prayers ... , aren't love. . .
. They don't prepare a way for you to die. // They are a lie." Still, he
advises, "Keep on singing. Soon the truth [that song is a lie] will
break your heart."
Taking his own advice, Penna continues to sing eight more songs before
LITTLE SONGS
ends. Among the more memorable are the psalmic "This World Is Good," the
touching "A Gift of Words," and the paradoxic "Crying for Joy," the
final poem. Like his advice to keep singing though song is a lie,
"Crying for Joy" uses paradox to make its point, that the appearance of
happiness, say in a bird's song, can be superficial—"happy notes //
without an aim"—but that "We make a pattern of [such] appearances./ We
wear our hair as if we were a bird / crying for joy to make something of
our tears." What a great note on which to end
LITTLE SONGS,
the
poet/maker confessing that beneath the birdsong that informs these poems
lies a sadness that poetsong seeks to transform into something
affirmative.
In LYRICS TO
GENJI,
Penna moves from
the enclosure of the sonnet to a freer verse form, with shorter lines
and longer poems addressed to Genji, a sort of muse, alter ego, and
older friend, whose name (which means "two beginnings" in Japanese)
occurs at least once in each piece. The poet alternately cajoles,
teases, and queries Genji, whose appearance is like a grandfather's. In
particular, the poet asks Genji about God and gods: "what god listens to
that clanging [of church bells] / and doesn't feel annoyed?"
To illustrate the relationship between the poet and Genji, let me
closely read poem 3 from this set of 77. Here is the entire poem:
Genji, I'm sorry for you.
I live in a house.
When the wind
blows
through the house,
I know.
But you have to go
on guessing.
When you come in
the answer has
just left.
When you go out
again,
the answer lies in
my book.
When, when, when,
Genji?
I'm waiting for
you to come.
My hands, this
time,
knead earnest
bread. It rises now
in a cool, dark
place. It asks
like a hermit to
be left alone.
Then, it does
invisible work.
Of the sixteen lines here, twelve are end-stopped, a very high
percentage in contemporary verse. Monosyllables predominate; from "for
you" (line 1) through "guessing" (5), twenty-two consecutive onesyllable
words occur, and five more follow. Besides "Genji," only ten other
two-syllable words ("answer" twice) occur, and in the last line, the
keyword, "invisible," gains emphasis by having four syllables. The
"invisible
work" here is the
rising of the seeker-poet's creative spirit, with which his hands "knead
. . . bread" (13), with its pun on "need," in the "cool, dark" (14) mind
of the poet. And the result is the poem itself, which arises from the
divine afflatus—"the wind [that] blows / through the [poet's] house"
(3-4).
But Penna teases Genji with the thought that the poet is superior to the
muse, for after the muse departs the poet has "the answer" to the
repeated question "when," "in my book" (9), as the appearance of this
poem 3 and the rest of the
LYRICS,
attests. In a
sense, then, this poem is an "ars poetica," a text on how Penna makes
his poetic art. Through his deceptively simple clarity, he recalls the
line of great monosyllabic poets like Donne and John Clare, Stephen
Crane and Frost, and the recent American poet laureate Kay Ryan.
Finally, a word in praise of S4N Books, a small press in Brooklyn that
specializes in spiritual books, for having the editorial acumen to
select Adam Penna's manuscript for publication. The press did a
beautiful job of making these serious poems into a book, one that has
given me great pleasure through several readings and that will stay on
my shelf in easy reach.
George Held, a former Fulbright lecturer and six-time Pushcart nominee,
is the author of 13 poetry collections. He is widely published in small
press journals and his work has been featured on Garrison Keillor's
Writer's Almanac. He is a frequent contributor to Book/Mark.
Midwest Book Review
A poem can be a self-induced therapy.
Little Songs & Lyrics to Genji
is in a way, two volumes of poetry, as Adam Penna presents two trains of
thought on his works of poetry. The
Little Songs
half focuses on the spiritual side of the world, while
Lyrics to Genji
focuses on friendship and memories, among other subjects.
Little Songs & Lyrics to Genji
is a unique team of poetry, highly recommended.
From the Author
Originally posted
here
Next month, S4N Books releases my first full-length collection of
poems, Little Songs & Lyrics to Genji. Actually, the book
contains not one full-length collection, but two long sequences. The
first, “Little Songs,” is a series of sonnet-like poems presented in the
order in which they were written. The second, “Lyrics to Genji,”
addresses an imaginary friend named Genji. These, too, are presented in
the order in which they were written, and try to explore the same
material “Little Songs” do, but from another, more playful perspective.
”Lyrics to Genji” is a response to a rejection letter I received after
submitting some of the “Little Songs” to a magazine where I had always
had luck publishing. The editor of the magazine wrote me a handwritten
note suggesting, for his tastes, my little songs were too sad.
When I began to write the little songs, the aim was merely to right
myself each day. These poems served as daily meditations, and so if
they take a more spiritual or even devotional tone this is one of the
reasons. If you read the rest of the blog, you’ll see that, indeed, the
poet’s attitude toward the spirit and the divine is a preoccupation of
mine. Further, I have suggested it ought to be a central concern for
all poets and readers of poetry. I can’t imagine an entirely secular
poetry worth reading. Every poet, and this ought to be especially true
of American poets, I think, is a religious poet. I mean religious, of
course, in the widest possible sense of the word, and mean it to include
those affiliated with a certain brand of religion and those who have
found what suffices elsewhere.
It may be fair to say that this book, beginning with the little songs
and ending with the lyrics, are the narrative of my spiritual attitudes
as they developed over the course of more than a year. My spirit has
been and continues to be restless and curious. And I find the more I
search the more certain I am there is something to be found, and the
more certain I am that almost all of my previous notions have been just
as misguided as they have been earnest. In fact, while it is safe to
say that these poems accurately catalogue a desire for truth, they are
also a chronicle of failures. They must be, because even the best
poems must fail. However close they come, that which a poem seeks to
define always lies just beyond its power to say. It is because of this
that Whitman calls for strong readers. Strong readers are ones that
read keeping in mind that these are only outlines.
I have written a lot about what the uses of poetry are. It many ways
the poems in this book are the proving ground for those ideas. Maybe it
is more accurate to say that the entries here are extensions of notions,
which were first discovered in these sequences. I have followed the
line of thinking, which I first read in Emerson, that says a man might
put his faith in the fact that his work will cohere because there is
something coherent in being. This, then, isn’t only a literary or
poetic faith, but a faith I have found to be true of my actions in the
world. These things we do mean something, and it is the job of faith to
find what they mean with a full heart, a broken heart, or a heart on the
mend. Who could or would avoid such a charge would avoid all of life.
Or all of life worth living.
I have said that a poet, because he is a poet, may not be a better
person but, because he writes poetry, is a better person than he would
otherwise be. I understand that this argument is an especially romantic
one, but I mean it with all humility. I didn’t write these poems,
neither have I ever put pen to paper, because I thought that what I had
to say was worth much to anyone else. The writing of these poems, and
all poems, is as selfish an art as one might endeavor to perfect. And
yet I can’t help but think that, at its best, poetry makes it possible,
if nothing else, for the self, the weary, the silly and self-seeking
atom, to escape those traps and blind alleys and find, in the end, the
paradise it wanted to find. I have not come to that walled-garden yet,
but already I smell the fragrance of joy. Perhaps it is just beyond.
Perhaps it is all around.
About the Author
Adam Penna lives in East Moriches, New York, with his
wife, and teaches at Suffolk County Community College. He is the author
of
The Love of a Sleeper
(Finishing Line Press, 2008), and his poems have appeared in numerous
magazines and journals, including
Cider Press Review,
The Basilica Review
and
Verse Daily.
His blog is at
adampenna.wordpress.com.
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